Friday, March 29, 2013

Shameless by Rebecca J. Clark


3 columns: Worthy Read
Buy it at Amazon
Publisher: Rebecca J. Clark, December 2012

Blurb
Haunted by a tragic accident 20 years ago, John Everest knows he doesn't deserve a family of his own, so he spends his days building the most successful fitness franchise in Seattle...and his nights alone. But that all changes when Samantha Rossi storms back into his life.

Happily single, Samantha feels there are only two types of men in this world: those who are good for nothing and those who are good for one thing. Now she needs that one thing desperately, because she wants a baby. John, a man from her past, is the perfect donor. He doesn't want children. He doesn't want a wife. He just wants her body. She can deal with that.

John agrees to Samantha's no-strings-attached proposal, never expecting to fall for the fiery beauty he'd wronged so many years ago. It'll take more than a shameless proposal to overcome their tragic past, but with a little luck and forgiveness, anything is possible.

Review
Airmid, Lady of Speed Reading, was pleased to read a story with such a sexy premise. She applauded Samantha Rossi's strength and conviction to become a single mother and yet puzzled over Sam's flamboyance and loudly promiscuous advances as she attempted to seduce John Everest once she had decided to invite him to be the sperm donor for her hoped-for child. Samantha's reasoning for her outward appearance and behavior was rooted in her teenage years when she let herself go due to the traumatic events of that one fateful night. So, in order to keep in shape and remind herself not to let that happen again, she wore tight-fitting clothes to alert herself should she put on a few extra pounds. The lady can understand those who use trellises and arbors to train their vines, shrubs and trees, but the realities of nature make this a lovely, yet false impression of the individual. As the story progressed Samantha abandoned those outward features and became someone entirely different. Airmid would have been able to better accept this transformation had Sam admitted from the outset that this was not who she truly was. Airmid admired the way John Everest was portrayed as a caring and thoughtful, and yet he was also demanding of Sam and determined to get the most out of their temporary relationship. Both Sam and John were enigmatic characters, as unpredictable as a bloom of mold on a good patch of tansy and rue.

Airmid was delighted with the secondary characters in the story who carried many scenes where the main characters became less than sympathetic as they failed to find a way to work out their differences and a rift grew between the lovers. The flow of the story was somewhat disjointed, like an ordered bed of herbs left to go wild for a few seasons. Some secondary characters, such as dear Brian, who reminded Airmid much of her beloved and brave brother, Miach, were introduced, and Airmid became quite attached to them, but then they disappeared for a long, lonely time leaving the lady to grieve over their whereabouts and worry what had become of them. Thankfully, they eventually reappeared, though the lady still grieves for Brian's outcome. After finishing the story and with its wonderfully satisfying ending, Airmid decided that there were really two stories in one. The first story had to do with Samatha's brave, bold goal of having a child and the second story had to do with John's growth beyond the terrible events of his youth that made it possible for him to finally find peace and happiness.

The lady Airmid will make one further suggestion to the author and that is not to summarize or skim over scenes that the reader and the lady were looking forward to experiencing in person. One scene that Airmid was disappointed not to find in the book was the scene where Sam announced her pregnancy to John, ending their temporary relationship. The anticipation of this scene was strong in the lady's mind and she was sorely disappointed to find that she was not able to harvest the fruit of the lovely tensions that the author had built toward that scene. Airmid realizes that the story took place over a long period of time and that some summarizing would be needed, but she suggests that if authors are going to build up the anticipation for an announcement they should deliver on that promise and allow the reader to see the scene in full bloom.
Overall, lady Airmid enjoyed reading the story of bringing together these two worthy people to become parents and share the love and joy of children in their lives. The lovely message put forth by this story is that we must all first forgive and learn to love ourselves before we can learn to love another. The author did a wonderful job of touching Airmid's emotions and she freely shed tears at one or two points in the story. If you are looking for a heart-wrenching and enjoyable story to lose yourself in, you would do well to choose Shameless by Rebecca J. Clark.

Wednesday, March 27, 2013

I Do - Over, Confessions of a Recalcitrant Bridesmaid - Michele Riccio

Genre:  Contemporary Romance
Published: January 1, 2013
Length:  327 pages
ISBN: 1481922602
Amazon  

3 Columns – Worthy Read

Blurb

Grace Douglas has a secret crush on Jon, the boy next door. The problem is: at thirty-six she's well past the age of secret crushes, her father insists Jon is her brother (by dint of his marriage to Jon's mother), and Jon is nothing more than brotherly when he spends the night in her hotel room.

Then a meddling fortuneteller convinces Grace's half-sister, Kitty she needs to re-stage her recent wedding – and get it right this time – or suffer the consequences. Dodging the bullets of a mysterious, if incompetent, stalker and fending off Geraldo, co-worker without a work ethic are a piece of wedding cake for Grace – compared to being Kitty's maid of honor.


Grace has to find a way out. Or be seen by the man she loves – wearing a bridesmaid gown.

Review

My lady Danu, forced by the inclement spring weather to retreat from the beach and its parade of eye-candy discovered the free books on Amazon.  I Do Over, Confessions of a Recalcitrant Bridesmaid by Michele Riccio was one such book.  I, her humble scribe, provide the following at her behest.

I Do Over is a fast, and in places, a frenetic read; a pace driven in large part by Grace’s snarky perspective.  First person point of view, while intimate, often seems, to my lady, more like navel-gazing than a means to a deeper immersion in a story world when applied to contemporary romance sans subgenre such as paranormal or suspense.  In this case, it became somewhat more problematic because one is left wondering if Grace prefers the merry-go-round she’s on.  To wit...

Grace suffers from the ills of close – as in living next door for example – proximity to her immediate and extended family in ways worthy of a sitcom.  But sitcoms are somewhat akin to cotton candy and whipped cream; fluffy and light and almost never filling.

Dysfunctional is a descriptor that sums up her familial interactions without doing them justice.  They are emotionally manipulative, self-serving and exhibit a mastery of selective hearing that is truly awe inspiring. And Grace experiences it all, accompanied by a silent, jaded and, at bottom, painful commentary while engaging in a kind of self-immolation on the altar of family obligation as she dances to the tune her step-mother whistles.  In fact, it’s like the song in one’s head one can never get rid of.  The snark becomes the means of continuing the pattern of unhelpful surrender –a pattern she carries into her work relationships as well.  One hears in the subtext her own awareness that that self-immolation is the price she pays for admission to the family or job even as she struggles to find the exit.

The snark Grace uses to keep her cool and avoid offending her family or to keep her job is, at times, laugh out loud funny.  One cheers for her at the same time one is mentally screaming at her to do a Nancy Reagan and just say NO!  Trouble is, by the end of the book, one is left feeling much less sympathetic towards Grace than when one started.  In fact, one is left wondering if the author’s naming of the heroine ‘Grace’ was deliberate or serendipitous. 

In romance the character arc of the hero/heroine is the plot. Without getting into spoilers the end point of Grace’s arc is less than fully satisfying.  A much more defined arc would have added the cake to the buttercream.

In spite of all that, I Do Over is a fast, fun read, good for the beach or the long wait at the doctor’s office.  The author’s eye for the nitty-gritty of family is both lucid and, surprisingly, affectionately amused.  It’s that detail that, in the end, makes this book work, and reaffirms The Goddess Danu’s determination to avoid long exposure to the company of her own extended family unless there are copious amounts of free booze and chocolate available.